Poem using poetic techniques- Murder

Running, reckless, ticking turning, doors are locking,

No more time.

Stabbing, screaming, fading, fearing,

Running away from this unknown crime.

Blood is dripping, she is dying, clutching the gun, hysteric crying.

This is Murder.

3 thoughts on “Poem using poetic techniques- Murder

  1. Indigo says:

    Oh my potatoes! This is really good! It had an unbreakable flow and you described well when you talked about…murder…I really hope that wasn’t from experience.
    Just kidding! I really liked your poem and the words you used. Good job!
    Keep writing,
    Indigo

  2. chiara2014 says:

    Hi Heidi,
    I really liked your poem because it had a long line and then it just ended with This is Murder. I also liked how you made it rhyme too. Good job!
    Chiara

  3. harguan2016 says:

    Hi Heidi
    I really liked the suspense in your story and at the end it was like WOW it was also really short and sweet Overall I thought it was a great Poem. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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